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Saturday, June 20, 2009
Writing Exercises Writing Exercise 1 I don't remember The days I spent as a young child Overseas with the *Golden Oldies, At the time still ripe and relatively young Sightseeing with more than eyes But you need hands The warmth of intertwining hands Palms face to face Lines running, crisscrossing Wherever they meet What am I saying I am saying I don't remember But I do Only that these things are inconsequential in nature I don't remember The places I've been to And I don't know How fortunate I am. They go: "Oh! Your mother tells me you've been to Cairns, and London, and **Glastonbury." Er is the response strung by spiders When they know not what convincing tale to weave. And often the phrase "I don't remember" Comes with regrets Because, why don't you remember? Chides my left brain. You've experienced it. Now it's wasted. But perhaps If we don't remember And we simply speculate There is imagination. And that speckle of creativity Might well flow Stronger and hotter Like a stream of molten lava And melt the iron lock Which holds our memories captive. Oh if we do How wonderful it is to remember! But how blessed it is not to remember Old age need not be a factor I am not old But sometimes I think I am old Because I don't remember. I don't remember I don't I *parents **not sure if it is an actual place Writing Exercise 2 Neon. Those neon advertising signs Of an un-airconditioned restaurant Selling prawn noodles. The family was there *Uncle Alvin, Ah Ee, Ah Ma, Ah Gong, Noah, Nathan, Naomi, Mummy, Daddy and me I have listed all of them from my fingers I need not count but I know they're all there After we eat I go to the pier It is night time And a thousand stars were twinkling Or maybe just my imagination of cliches because In Singapore, the stars are never as bright or as many Poets would like to think. The waters were black and the waves were roiling Some skipped pebbles But I wouldn't dare. And us, the cousins and I Played Follow the Leader There was grass, and there was gravel The grass was wet as it had just rained And it brushed constantly against my feet. There was gravel But I'm going to tell you how it feels, later. There was a moment in time A push A lull And then a frantic tumble As if they could not fall Fast enough Collapsed On me. And now I'll tell you how the gravel felt. It hurt. *Personal family names coined after years of familiarity. You notice that the word 'family' is in familiarity :) Note: Writing exercises are something that make you write and write and write. You can write nonsense (Cleo: Nun-sense!) and yet ultimately it will help you write better and express your feelings about a subject more clearly and yes it does help, I guess, with writer's block, because you are not allowed to put your pen down, no, not even for a second to pause to think, and you can start with something small and insignificant and it may turn into an epic drama or play that lasts 24 hours running. I do hope the above wasn't ALL utter nonsense :) "Pour your experiences into a mold." Thank you Ms Jean Tay
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Yours Truly
Regular kid. Irregular fetish. "Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent perspiration." said Thomas Alva Edison And to me, Poetry is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent getting lost in the moment Tagboard
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